Hi all! I'm a new user to livejournal, and basically I got this so I could share some of my writing out there and hopefully get some suggestions/criticisms/comments back :) I'm open to anything you have to say. So, here's the prologue for the young adult novel I've been working on that I"m trying to get published...let me know what you think! Title: Innocence (Prologue) Rating: PG-12/R (cussing is pretty much the only thing bad in here, some violence, but not really) Plot Key Points: Basic spy novel with a twist--main characters are Alex Weston and Brian Walker, as well as Chandler Poole and Brandon Nabors Enjoy! :) Prologue Brian Walker crouched on the rooftop of one of the tallest skyscrapers in all of Japan, directly across from the Japanese Embassy. He took off the standard black backpack all CIA operatives carried and took out the three pieces that would assemble his AK-47. Brian Walker wasn’t a normal seventeen year old. With swift and experienced fingers, Brian locked the three sections into place, reaching into his backpack for his ammunition; finally, he locked his round into the gun and toggled the safety switch off. Brian rolled his shoulders and sighed before reaching into the bag one last time to remove a small earpiece and a large wrapped bundle of cloth. Brian put on the small earpiece and immediately his ear was filled with the sounds of his co-operative on the mission, and best friend, Chandler Poole. “God this is so boring…why is it that we always get stuck with the boring missions?” ( Read more... ) Current Mood: excited
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